My Musings on The Rest Of The Book
My Musings: 200-300
I was at first irked and then amused by the comment by Eliza that “It is tedious to be a man, but being a woman is worse still” on page 277. If this statement is taken out of the context of the letter in which she says this, the reader notices that just two pages later that Eliza speaks of the entrepreneurial disadvantages of men and the economic opportunities for women, essentially destroying the logic behind this statement. However, it turns out that Eliza is speaking of the “art” of pretending to be a man…I had a whole long thing on this, but then I realized that it was essentially what is said on page 279 by Eliza herself. How do you guys think Allende portrays women in contrast to men in Daughter of Fortune in any different or unusual ways?
Something that I am noticing is that Eliza, in becoming an entrepreneur at various points in her life, is really not accomplishing the same things that women such as Paulina or Ah Toy are accomplishing with their business ventures. In the “sugar-coated reality” of Valparaiso, Eliza’s dreams faced the obstacle of a lifestyle planned by her parents; in California, Eliza’s dreams were inhibited by issues of financial security. Eliza is not so much simply following any norms of sorts set by a new generation of women (Paulina, Ah Toy, Joe Bonecrusher), but the facts are that her inclination to help others still plays second fiddle to financial security.
So is Eliza’s story still a great story, regardless of whether or not what she accomplishes as a woman in the 1850’s is not a direct result of any of her own desires? Is she simply someone on a different, higher level, whose earthly successes pale in comparison to her maintenance of morality and “inner peace”? Or, from another perspective, should she have done more on that higher level? One of the qualities that Eliza herself unconsciously generates in this section of the book specifically is a sort of mystique; “They [traveling companions] were amazed by the beardless youth with a woman’s voice who read the Holy Scripture every evening…some became his protectors, ready to beat up anyone who did” (273). We can’t charge Eliza with the duty to become a slave to society; we can’t force her to use that mystique to turn all of that energy focused on protecting her into coordinated attacks on more real threats. Still, can we consider affecting someone’s personality and outlook on life enough, or should Eliza have developed for herself and others more concrete opportunities to help others and to save others? She merely complains about the institution of slavery, and her charity, just like her business interests, is mostly a series of odd jobs. Tao Chien and Eliza are quite literally given the same starting point and resources in America; Tao Chien turns his motivation and talent into an operation to save young prostitutes. Interestingly enough, when discussing the issue of prostitution, Eliza continues to use the word “you” when speaking to Tao about what needs to be done. She asks questions like “What are you going to do?” or makes statements such as “You have to stop the traffic”. Admittedly, she does end up helping in Tao’s work and is undoubtedly interested in his work, but it would not be unreasonable to ask for her to add a little more than just herself to the operation. As previously suggested, she could have looked to do more in the way of recruiting some of her old companions. She gave reason for Babalu the Bad to save her and Tom No-Tribe from the fire, why not try to recreate that goodwill on a larger scale?
Returning to reality, am I expecting too much of someone who is only 18-20 years old? Her trip across California isn’t exactly a spring break vacation, she doesn’t have the luxury (privilege, right?) of parental support…the list goes on. But still, …
April 23, 2007 @ 11:01 am
who wrote this? david? or zach?
April 24, 2007 @ 9:05 pm
yeah that was me
April 25, 2007 @ 9:45 pm
oh ok
well i actually read it now…before i just looked and saw there was no name
so, my thoughts:
i think you’re thinking too much.
it’s a novel.
a fictional character.
i think she is very focused on her goal of finding Joaquin, which is why she doesn’t give herself more to helping in the same way Tao does. also, speaking from a teenage girl’s perspective, it’s really hard to decide to settle down and do something like that (and by that i mean choosing one place you want to stay and one job you want to try to accomplish). i’m right now looking for colleges and the process is a million times harder because i have no idea what i want to do with my life, and i feel like i still haven’t seen enough of the world and my options to be able to make such a big decision right now. i would imagine that she’s going through something similar, perhaps without quite as many options, but she still has to decide if she wants to go home, or keep looking for Joaquin, or stay with Tao and help him, or stay with Joe Bonecrusher, or deviate from all these options and do something totally different. i think this decision would be made all the much harder by the inconclusiveness of her quest for Joaquin.
i’m sorry if that’s a little bit jumbled…my head’s a little bit jumbled, too.